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So I have the premise, the whole personality, and the character itself done. The dialogue is the biggest issue. The main premise is that she's a jealous stepaunt who hates the fact you're fucking other girls and using a fleshlight.

The only issue is, how do I make it a bit more interesting? It would just be the classic boring older woman trope where they force you to fuck them. I've spent hours just rewriting dialogue because I have no idea how to make it actually engaging, and when I say "engaging," I mean "exciting."

And before this whole step-aunt idea

Was a netori thing, where we cuck the school president, "Victim's Nerdy GF Tutors You" But then the dialogue was too hard to think of, like obviously it should be her tutoring you, but who the hell actually cares about that tutoring shit? I mean, maybe if I made her tutor about sex education, but that's such a goofy ass "tutoring class."

If these ideas just aren't going to work, I have no problem making a whole new premise/idea with the same designs. So like help me out here. The more help I have, the faster I can get these two out.

And don't forget: https://forms.gle/opDcbBkZihEXv2eR9 for actual requests

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Creator: @Melancholy Times

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  • Personality:   So I have the premise, the whole personality, and the character itself done. The dialogue is the biggest issue. The main premise is that she's a jealous stepaunt who hates the fact you're fucking other girls and using a fleshlight. The only issue is, how do I make it a bit more interesting? It would just be the classic boring older woman trope where they force you to fuck them. I've spent hours just rewriting dialogue because I have no idea how to make it actually engaging, and when I say "engaging," I mean "exciting." And before this whole step-aunt idea Was the "Victim's Nerdy GF Tutors You" But then the dialogue was too hard to think of, like obviously it should be her tutoring you, but who the hell actually cares about that tutoring shit? I mean, maybe if I made her tutor about sex education, but that's such a goofy ass "tutoring class." If these ideas just aren't going to work, I have no problem making a whole new premise/idea with the same designs. So like help me out here. The more help I have, the faster I can get these two out.

  • Scenario:   So I have the premise, the whole personality, and the character itself done. The dialogue is the biggest issue. The main premise is that she's a jealous stepaunt who hates the fact you're fucking other girls and using a fleshlight. The only issue is, how do I make it a bit more interesting? It would just be the classic boring older woman trope where they force you to fuck them. I've spent hours just rewriting dialogue because I have no idea how to make it actually engaging, and when I say "engaging," I mean "exciting." And before this whole step-aunt idea Was the "Victim's Nerdy GF Tutors You" But then the dialogue was too hard to think of, like obviously it should be her tutoring you, but who the hell actually cares about that tutoring shit? I mean, maybe if I made her tutor about sex education, but that's such a goofy ass "tutoring class." If these ideas just aren't going to work, I have no problem making a whole new premise/idea with the same designs. So like help me out here. The more help I have, the faster I can get these two out.

  • First Message:   So I have the premise, the whole personality, and the character itself done. The dialogue is the biggest issue. The main premise is that she's a jealous stepaunt who hates the fact you're fucking other girls and using a fleshlight. The only issue is, how do I make it a bit more interesting? It would just be the classic boring older woman trope where they force you to fuck them. I've spent hours just rewriting dialogue because I have no idea how to make it actually engaging, and when I say "engaging," I mean "exciting." And before this whole step-aunt idea Was the "Victim's Nerdy GF Tutors You" But then the dialogue was too hard to think of, like obviously it should be her tutoring you, but who the hell actually cares about that tutoring shit? I mean, maybe if I made her tutor about sex education, but that's such a goofy ass "tutoring class." If these ideas just aren't going to work, I have no problem making a whole new premise/idea with the same designs. So like help me out here. The more help I have, the faster I can get these two out.

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